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0 posted 2002-10-11 12:03 PM


Not many know,
Not many have seen
What I know,
What i’ve seen

© Copyright 2002 Daniel Redding - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-11 01:11 AM


oh god.

so true.

but the worst timing.

::sobs::

so so true.

/jen/

i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister.

[the closest thing i've found to heaven is sitting here talking to you.bif naked]

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2 posted 2002-10-11 07:53 AM


A wonderful if not extremely short poem, I like it a lot but maybe it's worth developing into something larger. Anyway a wonderful read, keep on writing and thanks for sharing

Andrew

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3 posted 2002-10-11 07:41 PM


Not many have learned,
Not many have understood
What I have learned,
What I understand

Short and to the point, Ti, and I just had to reply like that. *hugs*

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4 posted 2002-10-11 07:42 PM


Nice nice nice nice. This was great.
Very short, very right, very perfect.

more!!!!

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5 posted 2002-10-12 08:41 PM




~Ttus

"My imaginary friend thinks you have serious mental problems."

(2002 Copyright)

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6 posted 2002-10-13 04:35 PM


~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

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7 posted 2002-10-13 08:35 PM


Hey Jen, did you get my email?

Sincerely,
Titus

"My imaginary friend thinks you have serious mental problems."

(2002 Copyright)

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