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Skyfire

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0 posted 2002-10-10 11:42 PM

A white rose I give to thee
  to show the world my love
A tender blossom fragile and pure
  to hold always in your care
Forever and beyond it will survive
  to remind you of my love
A petal may fall when I shed a tear
  but it will always grow back
May the sweet fragrence of it's bloom
  remind you of me and our love

~*~ To someone special

[This message has been edited by Skyfire (10-11-2002 02:37 AM).]

Marshalzu

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1 posted 2002-10-11 08:13 AM

This is such a beautiful poem Rhonda, you have used wonderful language and imagery very effectively, thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us *huggles*

Andrew

Skyfire

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2 posted 2002-10-11 07:37 PM

You're welcome for sharing this wonderful poem with us -- er, you guys. *hugs*

Local Parasite

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3 posted 2002-10-12 11:17 AM

This is definitely sweet, Skyfire. I like the part about how the petals will always grow back... so true, isn't it?

Nice work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

devinechild22
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4 posted 2002-10-12 02:01 PM

I really liked this! what a beautiful job. The imagry was awesome ans the wording and the flow was beautiful. Great job!!

*allison*

Skyfire

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5 posted 2002-10-12 06:58 PM

Aw, thanks you guys! I have a cult following! Okay, maybe not, but it's nice to see that people attempt to get through my babbling. To be honest, I thought this one was a little forced, but I wanted to write something for/to him, and I didn't want to wait till inspiration came. The first two lines were a part of another poem that didn't work out too well, but I liked those lines, so I used 'em again. Thanks again for reading you guys! *big hugs*

Marshalzu

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6 posted 2002-10-14 10:05 AM

Where did you take the two lines from? I'm sure I recognise them

Andrew

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7 posted 2002-10-14 02:33 PM

I liked this one. It's such a great love poem. Nicely done.

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LoveBug

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8 posted 2002-10-14 03:58 PM

This is a really nice poem... it's really sweet! Good job!

Most of us go to our grave with our music still inside of us.

Skyfire

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9 posted 2002-10-18 03:45 AM

the two lines came from a poem you never read, Andrew *grins*

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