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teenpoet
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0 posted 2003-05-19 10:40 AM


Sometimes today is different
Than yesterday
Sometimes I don't feel the biting pain
Of your words
To hate you must first have loved
And I did
So long ago
And now
I hate
Because you hate
I thought maybe you were different
And you are
but you still cause me pain
Maybe not physically
But it is just as bad
because I am nobody
To you
And I believe you

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

© Copyright 2003 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2003-05-19 11:17 AM


You aren't nobody...just because someone who once loved you thinks you are, you don't need to believe them. Don't listen to them! Well done!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

HopelessRomanticGuy
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2 posted 2003-05-19 10:38 PM


Elizabeth is right, you're most certainly someone, no matter what anyone might think or say.  You wrote this, didn't you?  You have a gift, and that alone makes you someone special.  Great poem!  Keep on a'writing!

Forever I will stand
always here with you.
Now stay and hold my hand
and together we'll go somewhere new.
~Rich~

BrokenDreams
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3 posted 2003-05-19 10:56 PM


Good write. One of the lines used to be my signature on here.

"To hate you must first have loved."

Ironically, I heard that in 7th grade from someone that ended up being my first love. He hates me now. *sad sigh* Nice poem.
Jenni

There are three kinds of people in this world, those who can count, and those who can't.

peachesNcream
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4 posted 2003-05-20 09:46 AM


Ohh...this was good!! I mean, I REALLY like this..LOL. Oh yeah, you're quote at the bottom is awesome. Great job! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

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5 posted 2003-05-20 01:21 PM


Mental pain is just as bad as any other. No one deserves this.

Hang in there...

--Marie

"You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life)

CwboyAtHeart
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6 posted 2003-05-20 02:11 PM


Words and feelings can hurt more then physical...  I hope things work out.  Thanks for posting.
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