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newguy04 Junior Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 17ohio |
With your opinion prevented My feeling are at last presented For as much love and care often untold Failure is inevitable it’s all foretold Your words are comforting and pleasing More and more your grip is increasing Words from the mouths of others Is your affection is for another But yet with you there's no apprehension To make sure this is not brought to my attention I found out today there wasn't another chance There was not even a second glance I'm just another admirer And you think that I'm a lier Youv'e said I've broken your trust None of it's true it's just No longer believed to have another direction I can no longer fight for my own protection [This message has been edited by newguy04 (05-06-2003 08:19 PM).] |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
I like this poem a lot... This is my favorite I've seen yet... This is a good poem... I don't know exactly what to say but I really really like this poem... |
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