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jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-05-02 11:20 PM

"Falling For You"  By: Janna Shaffer

Falling....
   Slowly down.....
           To You.....
               You Are So Addictive....

Slipping...
    Threw your Fingers.....
          Please Dont let go......
                 You are so caring....
Wanting....
    Only you....
         Please except me....
             Im falling for you....

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2003-05-03 04:47 AM

oh i remeber those days when i was falling for a guy. heh always turned out in heartache but yet life does go on.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-05-03 06:57 PM

Yep. That's me. Right now. Falling for a guy.

...and I think he's falling back.

Nice job - some spelling mistakes, but I love the way you formatted it.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-05-03 10:34 PM

oh this brings back memories...jeez i sound like an old lady and i'm only 15. lol good job on this one.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

Manth88
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

4 posted 2003-06-18 02:44 AM

Hey Janna u know i feel the same way about a guy and u know who it is. So great job, and dont stop writing.

!^*Manth88*^!

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

5 posted 2003-06-18 03:04 PM

Falling for somebody is quite often as much heartache as it is intriege. Great work, this stirred up some old memories of mine.

The world is good, and nothing bad ever happens!

morgansmiles
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 25
hicksville

6 posted 2003-06-18 05:26 PM

I know how you feel....this was a great poem! I loved it!

If you arent happy, then just laugh...people wont know why and the look on thier faces is sure to make you happy!

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

7 posted 2003-06-18 05:30 PM

If I'm not falling for one guy I'm falling for another, I know how you feel in other words. Love the poem and the format you used.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-06-18 09:11 PM

Very good -- I like the way you shaped this to help carry the meaning.

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WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

9 posted 2003-06-18 09:52 PM

I liked this a lot. It's a great way of speakin the truth. Peace. ~Kirah

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

10 posted 2003-06-18 09:55 PM

there is nothing i can say that would be better than anyone else has already said. great work.

stouSer
New Member

since 2003-06-19

Posts 1

11 posted 2003-06-19 02:02 AM

I love this poem! It completely sums up how so many friends of mine have had to feel about different guys even though they know that they will keep slipping through their fingers! Awesome job!

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

12 posted 2003-06-20 10:39 PM

you guys should learn how to walk

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