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FlyingCloud
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A little place inside my head

0 posted 2003-04-28 07:00 PM


The silence that speaks,
Between the poet's souls,
Weaving and breathing,
Flying and living,
Flamboyant colors,
that streak across.
Words on a blank page.

The silence that speaks,
Drop of water in a pond,
Rippling, flying, splashing.
The words that mix,
Oranges, reds, hues that exist,
More breathtaking,
than the dawn of a new day.

The silence that speaks,
In the living, breathing,
Eternal Earth, in its,
constant cycle, of death,
dying, and, in a way,
a sort of, escape.

It speaks in the flutter,
of ethereal angel wings,
it speaks in the hustle-bustle,
of mortal things.
But it speaks strongest, in those,
who cannot speak.
In the silence that Speaks.


^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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[This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (04-28-2003 07:00 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-28 08:51 PM


wow awesome poem very well worded i liked it a lot.
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2 posted 2003-04-28 11:33 PM


Beautiful..Amazing imagery and wonderful word scheme..wow..
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sing'n fool
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3 posted 2003-04-29 03:57 PM


Beautiful description, and the wording...Perfect.  Great write!  I look forward to more of your work.

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