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Peacebri
Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44


0 posted 2003-04-21 04:57 PM



I shed my tears of blood
Tears of my soul
Tears never shed before
I cry them out
Because of my pain
Which puts my soul in doubt
Still, The tears come, No matter what I gain
Painful memories burn in deep
Each time I try to sleep
They come to torture me
Making me cry
Making me weep
These memories I wish not to keep
Burn in my soul
Chill my heart
And make me angry at the world
Which is, As I believe, The hardest part.

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peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-04-21 06:11 PM


This had a lot of feeling to it...good use of words! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
2 posted 2003-04-21 06:30 PM


This is really good! I felt it the whole way through! Nice job!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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