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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2003-04-16 03:46 AM

It's odd...everyone always talk about wanting to "fall in love".That's not even the good part...that's the test.The good part is your reward...the everlasting comfort of being loved and befriended by that one person that you need to breathe.

All Our Lives

All our lives, we'll be in love.
For now we're still so young.
Ever changing buds of life,
with so much left undone.

All our lives, we'll be as one;
bonded through the storms
of growing old in a world
that longs to see us torn.

All our lives, in eachother's eyes,
we'll gaze in awe and see
the wonderful things we know
that no one else could be.

In countless moons, when we're aged
and battle scarred all over
you'll help me to bed at night
and share with me your cover.

In those years, when we're old
and pray our lives we keep,
I'll kiss your cheek, brush your pretty hair and sing you softly to sleep.

We've not drank from the fountain
that keeps our hair or flesh
free from showing signs of what
our bodies may have left.
Yet our hearts and our minds
will forever be revived
by the youthful wonder of love
that's been there all our lives.

J.H.

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2003-04-16 02:12 PM

Hey~ been a loooong time since I've read anything from you. Breath-takingly wonderful as usual. Your poems always held such meaning and they could touch anyone in one way or another. I see nothing's changed

keep up the great work

*dQ

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-04-16 02:27 PM

This poem is so amazing! I really really love it!! Great work! I can relate to what it's saying, reminds me of me and my boyfriend.

Well, you definitely got my vote! Keep up the good work!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

3 posted 2003-04-17 12:48 PM

i dont even know what to say to you any more besides wow and can i please be your prentend girlfriend lol jk

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-04-19 03:31 PM

Absolutely beautiful, as are all of your poems. I just love it! Add another vote to your total!! Nice job...absolutely excellent!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2003-04-20 06:12 PM

Nice poem, gets my vote.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

6 posted 2003-04-20 06:14 PM

oh this is such a GREAT poem and Perfectly worded! I LOVE IT!
-ali-

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

7 posted 2003-04-20 09:41 PM

Wow, this was very touching! Ya got my vote, great write! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

8 posted 2003-04-22 03:25 AM

This is a wonderful piece.....Very good!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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