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aaron woodside
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0 posted 2003-04-09 05:03 PM


Well I'm back.  I tend to disappear for a while only to pop up ever now and then.

Anyway, I have a few things to post so here goes.  First a riddle.

It's when you know something isn't right.
icy rivers chill the bone
inside the burning mountain
silence is golden, but pounding rocks persist
slow dull agonizing aches
the mountain grumbles alone
a widow of the joys of sleep.

What am I?

I personally don't think its all that hard.  I'm sure someone will get it in no time.  

ex animo,
Aaron

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Paragon
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1 posted 2003-04-10 12:05 PM


hangover or migraine
or insomnia


Deep_Inside
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2 posted 2003-04-10 12:07 PM


i dormant volcano i think
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3 posted 2003-04-10 12:11 PM


Paragon is on the right track, but still wrong.  Guess again.

ex animo,
Aaron

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4 posted 2003-04-10 01:20 PM


Great writing but I havent't got a clue... thanks for sharing

Andrew

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5 posted 2003-04-10 05:41 PM


ok ok hint time.  

what makes you feel icy and hot at the same time.  (don't say Icy Hot, the sports stuff)

ex animo,
Aaron

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6 posted 2003-04-11 06:25 PM


Was thinking more like "the chills", but now I'm thinking it's a fever.
Interesting...

Leah
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7 posted 2003-04-11 07:47 PM


Ding Ding, we have a winner.   Just sign here for your free prize of nothing.  

You got it.  It's a fever.  I wrote this when I was sick earlier this yr.

ex animo,
Aaron

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8 posted 2003-04-15 08:51 AM


ok weird...but interesting
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9 posted 2003-04-15 09:58 AM


A fever reading back it all makes sense, great writing
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10 posted 2003-04-20 09:28 AM


A fever...hmm. Now that I read back over it, it really fits. Interesting topic...but I like it! Nice write.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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