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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
I wrote this last night about my Step-Dad I trusted you, and you turned on me. She loved you, so I did too. Without you Erin wouldn't be here, that's the only good from you. How different my life would be, I'd still be in Cali. Now Erin has to go though this, Mommy has to too. You were supposse to be the one, The one she could depend on. Now you're sick, Depresstion has taken over. You may have lost your way. I hope you find yourself, Someday...  Melissa |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
A very poignient write. You have my thoughts and prayers for his recovery. Great job. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Sorry hun, I hope he gets well, depression is scary and no fun for anyone around or involved. Nice write though, good way of expressing your emotions, I find that sometimes poetry can be a release..Anyways Nicely done! ~Live and Laugh~ People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Sorry to hear about this, but it really isn't his fault. Never tell him that you think so, that will only make it worse, I know. Good expressions here. WinterWren |
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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
Thanx buddies. I didn't know how to say that all we want is for the real Richard to come home. Thanx again, Melissa  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Melissa, I send my prayers out to you and your step-dad that soon he will recover, dearest friend, I know this anxious feeling and know you have all our support, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
this is so sad but stand by him and he will be better  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
This is one of the more intence and conflicting things that a young person deals with and thus being the hardest to want to express...you did, which is impressis enuff...then you did it so well. J.H. Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
You spelled 'depresstion' wrong...it's actually, 'depression.' But nice work anyway. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
This is very sad, but don't give up on him. What he needs is all of you. You have to stay strong. Your expression of emotion is very good. It's almost as the words jump from the page. I wish you all well. Don't give up hope!! Sing'n Fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! [This message has been edited by sing'n fool (04-27-2003 11:49 PM).] |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
I used to have problems with my step-father as well. We just didn't see eye to eye. The trick is to grow into it. I know that sounds cliche, but it really is the truth. I hope things turn out well for you in the future. Good write. ex animo, Aaron Woodside IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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