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Letting Go (please read)
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Letting Go (please read) |
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Lindsay Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59South Dakota |
Can't take this pain anymore Tired of crying Hate the way you make me feel This has got to stop Don't like being abused like this Why do you treat me like you do? All I'm asking for is a little love A little support in what I do Is that to much to ask? I'm afraid to let you go But unless all of this changes, I think I might have to [This message has been edited by Lindsay (03-28-2003 11:16 PM).] |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
The idea is good but it seems like the reader is kind of left hanging. Maybe you could add some more to it?? idk, maybe its just me. Jenn don't ever let others tell you who you are |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
In my mind, the best poems are the ones that leave you hanging. I love those kind. Great job.. Riley Windows stained with the fog, words written in by a girl. |
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