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Teen Poetry #6

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anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

0 posted 2002-10-03 06:51 AM

                              * Rain *

                    She bowed

                               her head .

                          and crystal strands

                       of  hair

                     Fell

                         down

                     And washed this weary world,

                                       with

                                beautiful

                          acid

                     tears.

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

[This message has been edited by anawnda (10-03-2002 07:08 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-10-03 09:54 AM

I love this, I love rain, my favorite weather, so I just love the images here...(did I say love?

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Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-10-03 01:30 PM

This is superb! Absolutely wonderful, Anawnda... I think it's one of my favourites of yours, for sure. It's so consice, but so beautifully done...

It astounded me to read it, you did a great thing making your words dribble down the page like that... a visual treat.

Absolutely flawless. My library entry for today.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

3 posted 2002-10-03 02:13 PM

This is so very elegant in its style, you created a wonderful image here, well done

Anya

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