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Teen Poetry #6

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PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

0 posted 2003-03-05 02:34 PM

No reason to forgive, no reason to forget
Your words were so sharp, so scolding
Peirced swiftly into my heart
I'm suddenly alone, Left with nothing
Only impressions of the love you once gave

No reason to listen, no reason to speak
Your sorrows could never take away these scars
I've bled the pain enough, you can't have a chance
I won't allow you the satisfaction of my voice
My ears and mouth are closed to you

No reason to live with you, no reason to die without
No reason to love again, yet many reasons to cry out
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I just wrote this like two seconds ago, I'm not sure whether I like it or not.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

1 posted 2003-03-05 08:59 PM

You should like it. There are many things here to think about...and now you have me thinking

Bah! It's ok. I'll live with using my brain for a day.
I like it!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-03-09 04:22 PM

I really liked this poem, it made me think, good job!
Jenn

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-03-09 09:06 PM

definetly made me think. it took me twice to get the whole thing. its really good.

Jenn

LiLFiGnEwToN
New Member

since 2003-03-09

Posts 2
where it rains all day long

4 posted 2003-03-09 09:15 PM

i really like this

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