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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
He's sweet he's nice, he's your dream come true He's very polite and compliments you Whenever you're around, he's the greatest guy He'll always greet you with a friendly "hi" He's starts out nice, then slowly gets worse He isn't at all like in the first verse What were you thinking when saying he was great Now he seems like your worste possible mate Guys you see are all the same They start out nice, and turn out lame You just got to deal it's time to move on You thought you liked him...guess you were wrong! No offence to all you guys out there that aren't like this..but I know that alot are!!!!! |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
That is true in too many ways! I agree with you. Very cute...I really think 4 out of the 5 I've read so far have rhymed...I'm getting tired, maybe I should take a nap and come back. Very good and sooo much truth. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
It is very true, nice write ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Bla bla bla I understand the poem and what it's trying to say, but the generalization within it about men is not cool. Hehe, but no worries, we all have our times of frustration and what better way to get it out than a poem? I thought the poem was fine, but do know..... you'll find better men, one's that won't suck EVER. Well....you know what i mean. good luck  -j- Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end. |
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