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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-10-02 08:38 AM


Promise me,
you'll let me know,
how you feel,
so we can grow.

Sweet surrender,
your soft caress,
your gentle kisses,
my heart- undress.

I know its short...o well lol I'm trying to get through my writers block ...so..tell me what u think lol

You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel.

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1 posted 2002-10-02 09:13 AM


Writer's block can be hell, can't it?  Maybe you should go over some of your older poetry and read through it, to try and see what frame of mind you were in when you wrote all of that.  This can sometimes help me.

Another thing that I tell everyone is, for writer's block, don't write about your first idea... specify and specify until it's a very narrow idea, and then write about that exclusively and in great detail.  Don't forget to use a few techniques and symbols, those usually come naturally to us when we don't have writer's block, but we have to nudge them a bit when we do have it.

Good luck.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Spine Grinder
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2 posted 2002-10-02 04:05 PM


yes writers block is hell..i hate it lol, thanks 4 the advice.

You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel.

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3 posted 2002-10-02 11:19 PM


when I can't write, I wait till it comes, I don't like to force it....it's fustrating as all get out, but I wait I liked this and you should play with it, extend the thought further, if you can.
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