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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-01-23 07:13 PM

I wrote this today in History, yet again. Rediculous amounts of time to study for the easiest quizzes, I tell ya... lol Anyway, let me know what you think.

YOU ONLY KNOW MY NAME

Why does it matter
What my name is
If you don't even know
My place in the world

Who am I is not
The name that I go by
But is what's written
Upon my soul

If you want to know me
You can read my words
My entire life story
Poured out within my poems

Don't think you can judge me
You only know my name

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2003-01-23 07:25 PM

"Who am I is not
The name that I go by
But is what's written
Upon my soul"
yet again i like it...bring me back to Shakespeare "A rose by ny other name would smell as sweet" i think thats how it goes...i like this one to

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-01-23 10:14 PM

Hey hun! This is yet another great one! All that I've come to expect from you! The words seem to flow together to form a expression of the mind more than just a poem written on paper. I'm not sure if that makes sence or not but I really do like this one.

Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love)
~Bella~

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

3 posted 2003-01-25 05:35 PM

hey,
i really liked this!
good write
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

Silent~Inspirations
Junior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 13

4 posted 2003-01-25 09:00 PM

I liked your poem, It was pretty great. One big thumb up!

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2003-01-25 10:01 PM

Cody, this was a very enjoyable read. keep writing.

QUOTE:
"Don't think you can judge me
You only know my name"
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anyways... i really enjoyed that specific part...*hig fives you*

Regina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello

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