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0 posted 2003-01-22 07:26 PM


Pent up inside
not let out
Never fully freed.

I cause you illness
I cause hurt
I am hidden

But what am I?


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1 posted 2003-01-22 07:32 PM


Male chastity?  

..

Just kidding...   Hope I don't get lynched for that one.  Yikes!

I'd say it's... nostalgia, maybe?  I'll put more thought into it, rest assured.  

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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2 posted 2003-01-22 07:35 PM



Rhonda...you already know that I know...so just hugs.
Okay...even more hugs.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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3 posted 2003-01-22 07:49 PM


My guess would be feelings or love, but, that isn't always hidden, most often isn't. But, besides Parasite's first guess I can't think of anything else.

A shorty, eh? I like it,

~Titus

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
                 --Aldous Huxley

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4 posted 2003-01-23 12:24 PM


A chest burster like that off alien?
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5 posted 2003-01-23 03:47 PM


LP - LOL nice try, but not quite.  Nostalgia? Nope, sorry
Vicky -   back Mum
Ti - feelings or love.... nope
Andrew - Yeah that's totally it   (for the record, that's NOT it)

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6 posted 2003-01-23 06:52 PM


LMAO @ Andrew

Hmmmm...a---poem which REALLY wants to be written? :S

You know the day's gonna be bad, when you start it off---with Sephiroth at your door, demanding his toaster back...

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7 posted 2003-01-24 10:29 AM


Your heart?

stabbing in the dark here *makes stabbing motions*

~AF~

"Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal

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8 posted 2003-01-24 08:25 PM


not sick are you? eeekkk....ummmmm....bitterness or anger?
*makes a stupid lost face*
well i tried....(sorta)
regina

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9 posted 2003-01-24 08:36 PM


Gaseous matter? Oh, nope, wait, that doesn't stay in.

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