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Imajica
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0 posted 2002-09-27 06:35 PM




My reflection screams
"Super Model!"
In blue sparkly print
Above features I've stared at all my life
That seem completly unremarkable
And the cracked logo isn't helping

I could be looking at a pimple
On my (edit)
And it would emmideatly achieve
"Super Model!"
Status




"Is there a superintendent of the spaceship, Luke"
-APS Superinteddent Brad Allison

[This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (10-01-2002 12:40 PM).]

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Match
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1 posted 2002-09-29 01:31 PM


hmmmmmmmmm, I liked this thanks
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2 posted 2002-10-12 04:10 PM


It's so great to see a positive poem.  Self-esteem is a wonderful thing.

Supermodel power!

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3 posted 2002-10-12 04:11 PM


I liked the poem....well done.

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4 posted 2002-10-12 09:21 PM


Loved it!


Ri

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5 posted 2002-10-13 03:49 PM


Woo! Go you! Awesome that the self-esteem is high in this one! Not a very common thing these days unfortunately. keep that attitude!
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