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WindSong
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Long Island, New York

0 posted 2003-01-19 10:48 PM


Some of this may not make sense. But this is just a basic describtion of what life SHOULD be. Not what it is...because we all know life is no Peaceful, lovable or happy....

Peace
Elevating
Angelic
Cheap
Extraordinary

Love
Outstanding
Very good
Expensive

Happiness
A lot of love
Pleasing
Parades of fun
Interacial everything
No seperation among different people
Equality for everyone!
Shameless
Stupendous

I was bored in Math and my favorite thing to say is Peave Love and Happiness...but that's unlikely in this world...See ya!


*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

[This message has been edited by WindSong (01-19-2003 10:48 PM).]

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Jaime
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1 posted 2003-01-19 11:05 PM


I'm far too cynical to really like this poem. lol I liked how you said though that peace is cheap and love is expensive.

Peace, Love, and Happiness to you.

- Jaime

Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe.

WindSong
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Posts 313
Long Island, New York
2 posted 2003-01-19 11:15 PM


Gotta add some humor to my odd poems. Somethin that I do...I love to odd. (i'm on meds so dont mind me me gots a headache!)
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