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CwboyAtHeart
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0 posted 2003-01-17 06:01 PM


This is a song I wrote today in history after I finished a quiz.  It was inspired by a song by a group called Philmore...  Anyway, Just kinda somethin that I came up with.  Let me know what you think  

SHE CAN WALK ON WATER

I bought me a goldfish
Just the other day
There's other fish in the sea
At least that's what they say

My time with her isn't the same
As with those that came before
She's just a fish out of water
She lays around and flops on the floor

Chorus:
But she can walk on water
She'll never cease to amaze
When she swims in her bowl
I could be entertained for days

She won't be the one, though
That I'll settle down with
She only remembers a few seconds
And she forgets it all on the fifth

Chorus

Just this winter one cold night
We sat by the fire just after dawn
The water in her bowl boiled over
No she rests in peace down the john

Chorus

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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wvplayernotreally
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1 posted 2003-01-17 06:13 PM


lol cody you have to much time on yur hands! ahaha but its all good lol liked that part about the john and yes that sounds like philmore. haha

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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2 posted 2003-01-18 01:04 AM


hahaha another fishy song!!!! right on i love philmore.
robin

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3 posted 2003-01-18 02:21 PM


So strange.

I like it; songwriting is more natural for me then poetry.  

~Titus


"A life unexamined is not worth living."
                       -Socrates

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (01-18-2003 02:22 PM).]

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