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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

0 posted 2002-09-27 04:26 AM

the words i cant speak you say
the thoughts i cant think you know
the emotions i cant convey you feel
this is why you are perfect
you make me want to feel again
you make me want to be again
all the persistent memories fade
and you come clear
like the sun to warm my day
like the torch to light my heart
you are there to bring me into tomorrow
to give me a brighter day
and to keep me from wandering through the fray
hopefully in due time you will be mine
to love and to hold

...eor

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2002-09-27 06:04 AM

and I hope you succeed...

well done...

regards to you,
sudhir

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

2 posted 2002-09-27 11:14 AM

Best wishes...

Great write...

Sounds as if you've found your better half.

"You're the center of adrenaline And I'm beginning to understand You could be the best thing about me." -SG

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2002-09-27 05:02 PM

thanks guys!!!...eor

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

4 posted 2002-09-30 02:05 PM

Good title. I enjoyed this poem quite a bit.

It's nice that you've found someone like this.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2002-10-10 05:13 AM

thank you...eor

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

6 posted 2003-07-24 11:17 PM

Very much enjoyed everything I read of yours is always so great.

-ash

I'm just kickin it up

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

7 posted 2003-07-24 11:43 PM

dude, that was deep. ha ha

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

8 posted 2003-07-25 12:50 PM

It seems like this a wish upon a star sort of thing... the ending gave it all off that way. Stupid Jimminy Crikect he's never here when we need him huh? I liked it and thats all that I can critique at the moment...

NJS

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2003-08-14 02:36 AM

Being held is also good.

yankees01rugby
Junior Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 48
USA

10 posted 2003-08-14 10:22 AM

sounds like you've got the right person for you...best wishes!

great write!

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

11 posted 2003-08-14 10:54 AM

I'm happy that you found someone who is so perfect for you. I hope your love is returned. This was a good write, I felt the whole thing. I wish you the best of luck.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

lilvolleygurl06
New Member

since 2003-08-14

Posts 2
NY, USA

12 posted 2003-08-14 03:17 PM

that was a very touching write..

i enjoyed that quite alot...

i wish you the best of luck with this person you seem to care for alot

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

13 posted 2003-08-14 03:27 PM

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SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

14 posted 2003-08-14 09:35 PM

Aww...this was so sweet! I loved the word usage. Flowed beautifully. Read her this, and she'll be yours! At least if she's anything like me...

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