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Teen Poetry #6

I'm Something Else All Together

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2003-01-16 08:29 AM

"I'm Something Else All Together"
(15/01/03)
© 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
Show me off like a prize,
The conquer of your life,
But you've missunderstood it all.
Not the one's from movies,
Or one's from magazines,
I'm not your kind of beautiful.
You can plead, fall to kness,
But I will never be.
What you haunt, what you want,
I'm not your fantasy.

Chorus
I'm not your beauty queen
Supermodel or cinderella,
I'm something else all together.
Something old, something new.
I'm not the air you breathe
Your hearts angel or your forever,
I'm something else all together.
A woman whose all true.

Verse 2
I stand tall I stand strong,
I know where I belong,
Far from your arms of illusion.
'Cause I'm a real woman,
And there's nothing I can't,
If I deny your dellucion.
You can try, you can lie,
You can call me a rose.
You can grasp, you can ask,
I'll never let you close.

Chorus
I'm not your beauty queen
Supermodel or cinderella,
I'm something else all together.
Something old, something new.
I'm not the air you breathe
Your hearts angel or your forever,
I'm something else all together.
A woman whose all true.

Bridge
Who are you to judge what I am,
Who are you to say what I can't.
I guess that you are too blind to see,
So you better listen carefully.

Chorus
I'm not your beauty queen
Supermodel or cinderella,
I'm something else all together.
Something old, something new.
I'm not the air you breathe
Your hearts angel or your forever,
I'm something else all together.
A woman whose all true.
I'm not your beauty queen
Supermodel or cinderella,
I'm something else all together.
Something old, something new.
I'm not the air you breathe
Your hearts angel or your forever,
I'm something else all together.
A woman whose all true.

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

1 posted 2003-01-17 11:29 AM

Again... what an awesome song that would make, you have some great talent my friend.
Keep up the outstanding work, can't wait for more!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

2 posted 2003-01-21 12:48 PM

Wow, this is just awesome! I'd love to hear it to music . . .

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