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anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK

0 posted 2003-01-09 04:18 PM


And I don't know how anyone remembers my name
when everything about me feels luke warm,
tepid, an average serving of mediocrity.
I can't picture my features, I'm indistinct in my own minds eye.
I'm thinking I can't make imprints,
can my feet leave footsteps in the sand?
It shocks me when people I've known
recognise my face these days,
can my weak words form into something individual,
something alive, away from the background humming of yes, no, mabey so,
can my whispered conversatins move away from the polite please?
I'm just a watered down version,
living a faded photograph life


© Copyright 2003 Anne Hegarty - All Rights Reserved
jeffwillett
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since 2003-01-04
Posts 86
Texas, US
1 posted 2003-01-09 06:46 PM


This was a very nice poem...can't put my finger on it
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