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PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2003-01-08 07:12 PM

Containment unable, it boils over
burning itself within and without.
Seering every edge and crevice,
seething pain touches all.
Consumming fire burns,
eating alive every vein.
Frustration mounts,
and soon, you are shook,
hit by the wave of emotion unchecked.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2003-01-09 03:28 AM

I do like this. I really really do.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2003-01-09 06:32 AM

I really enjoyed reading this Titus, it seems to be very "angsty"though it is not totally dominated by the emotions.

Andrew

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

3 posted 2003-01-09 01:38 PM

Wow---this reminded me alot like...a papercut. The beginning of it stings you with it's own excellence, and then the searing pain rips its way to your mind and remains. Let me tell you my friend, this is one papercut not soon to be forgotten!

Rayndpnugah; ruf luimt E ajan pa cu cdibet...

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

4 posted 2003-01-09 11:57 PM

I could have sword I replied to this... I'm doing that way to often... I really am going senile... *sigh*

Anyway, you blew me away, yet again.

Keep writing or I'll...

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2003-01-10 12:44 PM

Thank you, everyone.

'droid, that was the coolest compliment I've ever gotten.

Oh, and, Kielo, you have read it before. But in the midst of being transferred, the poem dissappeared. So, here you have it anew.

~Titus

"A life unexamined is not worth living."
-Socrates

rimmie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 45
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

6 posted 2003-01-10 03:14 PM

I could have sworn I already wrote a reply for this one...guess not :S!...anyways I LOVED IT! I feel that the vocabulary and structure was absolutely perfect.
Keep up the goog job!

~RuZ~

jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

7 posted 2003-01-10 06:07 PM

maybe im just dim...but i don't know what this is about.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

8 posted 2003-01-12 12:25 PM

OO! OO! *sticks her hand up* Can I continue the trend?

"I could have sworn I replied to this one Ti!"

Actually Danniti, I *really* enjoyed this one. You caught me off guard with its darkness. I was sitting here thinking that it was going to be another innocent poemola from the great-jawed one, but No. It had expressed ANGER!

Me likes, nuff said

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2003-01-15 02:42 AM

Daniel~
Guess what...I KNEW I hadn't replied to this. LOL
I really do love this though...short and sweet,
but definitely gets the point across loud and clear.
Well done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

10 posted 2003-01-15 03:05 AM

very nice poem ti!! omg i did not know you had your pic on here omg omg omg omg is all i have to say heheheheheehehehehehehe i'll talk to ya later hun.
robin

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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