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Susie
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since 2002-12-19
Posts 36
Illinois

0 posted 2003-01-08 08:38 AM



I never asked you to love me,
I never told you to care.
I never begged you to hold me,
I never invited you here.

I never needed your kisses,
I never pleaded your touch.
I never cried for your comfort,
I never expected this much.

I never looked for your stare,
I never reached for your arms.
I never longed for your heart,
I never dreamt of your charms.

But still you do love me,
And still you do care.
Still you do hold me,
And still you are here.

Still you share your kisses,
And still you share your touch.
Still you share your comfort,
And still you share this much.

Still I see your stare,
And still I feel your arms.
Still I hold your heart,
And still I attract to your charms.

Even though I never asked,
You still do all that you do.
Totally unexpectedly,
I've now fallen in love with you.

© Copyright 2003 Susie - All Rights Reserved
lil cherry
Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86
Ont, Can.
1 posted 2003-01-08 11:49 PM


omg i can relate to this poems so much.  this is one the most amazingly written poems i've ever written. so touching, so real, so honest and so open.  you don't hide from what you are trying to say, you word it so elegantly. i'm in awe.
~~*lil cherry*~~

lil cherry
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 86
Ont, Can.
2 posted 2003-01-08 11:49 PM


omg i can relate to this poems so much.  this is one the most amazingly written poems i've ever written. so touching, so real, so honest and so open.  you don't hide from what you are trying to say, you word it so elegantly. i'm in awe.
~~*lil cherry*~~

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