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To breathe. |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
As a mind tells a story A heart pays the toll It rips one way, and tares apart the soul Hands of friendliness So it had appeared Friendliness disintegrated, as the final time grew near One touch and it again happens So quick to love so hard to trust Diving head first, water turns into dust Images remind me of what once was there Hallucinating,can this be real I take a moment and breath the cool air I'll take a minute to tell myself no There's so much I don't see so little i know I wonder is this love, or is this conceptual My heart gathers love as my mind protects Is this love is this what to expect? One heart, one soul, one thought just one Love is quickly over, before it has yet to begun. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i liked this. good imagery. well done.  If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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