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ShadyMakaveli
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0 posted 2002-09-25 10:23 PM



So closes another chapter
A past life to envision
Sounds of a childs laughter
Not ready to make decisions

Don't wanna be liable
Too bad there's no never never land
Aging is undeniable
Appears time has the upper hand

Each passing moment getting older
No turning back time
This world couldn't be colder
Gotta fight for mine

A struggle with one outcome
Second chances are rare
Will any good finally come
I'm asking in this final prayer

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1 posted 2002-09-26 02:48 AM


yeah.

too bad there is no never never land.

what a soul shattering all-too-real point.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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2 posted 2002-09-26 03:20 PM


Oh I liked this... one of my favourites from you.  

I especially like the thoughts expressed in the second stanza.

Very nice work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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