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WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

0 posted 2002-12-26 09:27 PM

I don't know if I like this one, but if someone else does, Im happy. And if it helps someone at all with anything, Im even more happy.

If wishes were horses then beggars would ride,
If wishes were wings, then I could fly.
If wishes were stars, then I would shine.
If wishes were helpful, I'd be by your side.
If wishes came true, then I would never have cried.

If wishes were real,
I wonder how many lies I could've erased.
I wonder how many heartbreaks would never have been
I wonder how different I'd be today.
Because I don't need wishes to ride.
And the ones that never came true,
The ones for which I've cried,
Have helped me to be what I am today.
They've pushed me to see,
That if you can make it through the tough times,
Even with tears in your eyes,
Then you are strong,
And you won't ever need wishes to ride.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

[This message has been edited by WinterWren (12-26-2002 09:47 PM).]

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

1 posted 2002-12-26 09:45 PM

Omgosh! that was great! I thoroughly enjoyed that!
*Applause*
You should like it...ok?
Outstanding work.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

2 posted 2002-12-26 10:26 PM

This was good. And no I'm not just saying it because you read my work and liked it. I'm saying it because it really was nice. I liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing.

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

3 posted 2002-12-26 10:42 PM

I REALLY REALLY REALLY like the first paragraph. It was all good but I especially liked that. Niiiiice Job!

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

4 posted 2002-12-26 10:48 PM

"If wishes were horses then beggars would ride"

This my friend is a classic line.

-Stinky Twinkie-

poeticpower
New Member

since 2002-12-27

Posts 3

5 posted 2002-12-27 12:43 PM

You should like the poem it is great...Good write

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

6 posted 2002-12-27 03:08 PM

I agree with the stinky twinkie.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2002-12-27 03:13 PM

Thank you for all your wonderful replies, actually I think it is a classic line, Im sure I've heard it somewhere else before.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2002-12-30 04:05 AM

Wonderful!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

9 posted 2003-01-22 05:13 PM

*sigh* Where AM I when you post these things? lol. I liked this one, it got the point across VERY well. Glad I had the oportunity to read it.

*~Rich~*

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

10 posted 2003-01-23 01:05 AM

Dang Rich, I don't know WHERE you are when I write these! But at least you took the time to look them up.
I think you missed one, called To Tomorrow. Normally I wouldn't bring it up, but only one person commented on it and that makes me wonder.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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