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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa 
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My mind is tired hurting broken the thoughts have poured out It has nothing left to give sleep is what it needs My mind loves the verses of Larue and Dogwood It rests on a pillow and drifts away To the places it loved to see overlooking the not so good memories Days on the beach and pier When it had the vast sea to ponder The noises and sounds were music to unfamiliar ears The colors and sights were amazing The one night my mind feel in love with a tall brown eyed skater The mind was in a whirl But well all know sometimes the mind and heart don't agree My mind forgets the pain that one boy started Remembering that boys have made pain for its life just another memory and lesson to be stored It gathers on the other dusty memories My mind is now rested the memories are vivid now the thoughts are pouring out It just need to drift " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
wvplayernotreally~ This is a nicely written piece and I really enjoyed reading it. "My mind is now rested the memories are vivid now the thoughts are pouring out It just need to drift" We all need to 'drift' in our memories once in awhile. You've expressed this beautifully.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
I enjoyed this a lot, too much even. I know exactly what you are saying...and you did it so well. Excelent write here! Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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