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Re: Broken Heart

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-12-21 09:31 PM

Hi there, I just thought I would reply with a poem, please read through it. I hope you would get better.

Love,
Vivian (pen Eliza Simmons)

Bittersome...Is My Past

Just yesterday, you said you loved me,
And my heart thought you were real.
Just when I started falling for you,
You departed and all lies
Floated on lake... clearly revealed.
Just when I thought your words were true,
That you enjoyed every moment with me,
You declared that it was all bittersome,
Don't you know you've hurt my heart?

Just when I thought I'm losing,
I see I'm really gaining...
To see the real you before regrets,
I shall praise the Lord.
Maybe your words were lies,
But you did help me through.
I lose nothing to you...nothing...nothing
And I know Santa is going to grant me wishes,
That the best is saved for last,
So I'm hanging all my wishes on
My windows, waiting for dawn.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

1 posted 2002-12-21 09:34 PM

Nice.

"But you did help me through.
I lose nothing to you...nothing...nothing"

I like.

Hyper Sensitive
New Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 6
a somnambulist society

2 posted 2002-12-21 10:31 PM

amazing... very good job...

-heatherlynne-

"I'm all by myself, the way I wanna be." - Silverchair

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

3 posted 2002-12-22 06:33 PM

....::sniffs:: I am trying to hold back tears... excuse me... ::Blows nose::

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