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rOxXbabY391
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0 posted 2002-12-20 04:24 PM


You said you really liked me
But I know that that's not true
Because if you truly liked me, you would have done the same for me
as I had done for you
I was just so stupid, So stupid and nieve
To think what i thought, believe what i believed
But now I'm done with that chapter
That chapter of my book
'Cause I put my glasses on
And took a closer look
I know now what you stand for
Your secrets and your lies
The deceptive wall you think no one sees
You sit and hide behind
But I could see right through it
And YOU is all i saw
And piece by piece
We took down that wall
But you put it back together
Each time you didn't call
So I'm turning the page now, this is done
We had our laughs
We had our fun
But in the end, I got hurt
So I'm ending this chapter of my book

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."

© Copyright 2002 Emily Calandrelli - All Rights Reserved
rxyfxy04
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since 2002-11-26
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1 posted 2002-12-20 05:16 PM


really GOOOOOOOD metaphor.. i love the comparison used with the book and all.. this one may tie with the other one!!!

RxyFxy04

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