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devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2002-12-15 12:37 PM

I live this life
Like when hell freezes over
Every day seems like a nightmare
I pinch myself to wake up
Only to find I already am
Shaking and shivering
Rocking back and forth
You look me in the eyes
I feel you drawing back my pain
Feeling it but not caring
You don`t ever ask me what`s wrong
You only care about yourself
May I ask you a question
What kind of friend are you?

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-12-15 09:39 PM

hey,
this was reallly good!
and i luv ur signature too!!
but anywayz,
this was a good write
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

2 posted 2002-12-15 09:59 PM

this was good but if this is about me........

but yea it was good....

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2002-12-15 10:33 PM

Thanks guys..Its not bout you but this piece is very personal..
Sam- I like my signature too!LOL
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

Rug_Burnt_Loser
Junior Member

since 2002-12-13

Posts 11
>>o.b.l.i.v.i.a.n<<

4 posted 2002-12-16 08:37 PM

erThis isn't about me is it? Because I know I talk too much.. I'm trying to quit. I think they make a patch for that...
AnyWho..
This is a good poem, very strong, very true.

A good vent.

keep it up.

"In a photo the size of a kiss, a kiss in the shape of a bullet..."
~GlassJAw~
~siberian.kiss~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-12-21 01:20 AM

devinechild~
This is a well penned piece.
You've written this is such a way that the message
comes through loud and clear and is quite powerful.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

6 posted 2002-12-22 08:28 PM

Nice job here. I know a few friends who I've felt this way towards. I especially liked this part:

Every day seems like a nightmare
I pinch myself to wake up
Only to find I already am

Great job!

*Me*
I'm pasteing my smile back on just to please you... I always knew Elmer's glue was good for something...

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

7 posted 2002-12-22 11:36 PM

thta was a very nicely put-together poem.it is a very expressive poem i love it.there's no better poem than one straight from the heart.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

8 posted 2002-12-23 10:00 AM

THis poem was very well writen.

I can't say how many times I've felt this way.

Just try to remember, no matter how bad it gets, there's always someone who cares. And don't begrudge your friend to harshly, sometimes we hide our pain much to well.

-Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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