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Ephraim
Junior Member

since 2002-12-07

Posts 24

0 posted 2002-12-13 01:58 AM

I've got to hurt you baby,
    because of how you're hurtin' me.
The only way I can,
    by keeping me from you.
You're runnin' fast from me,
yet standing quite still.
    Dualy pain and pleasure,
you're spreading through my system.

This disease, it's killing me,
    I'm your ego-boost.
Yeah, this disease, will I be free?
    I'm your ego-boost.

When I die, they wil say:
    yeah he had buddies but truly?
Be was his only friend.
     If you go, fact will become.
What am I to you? Yeah...

     I'm your ego-boost.
This disease, it's killing me.
     I'm your ego-boost.
Yeah, this disease, will I be free?
     Torture me ever slowly,
     I'm your ego-boost.

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-12-14 03:34 AM

hah was wondering why the line 'this disease, it's killing me' looked so familar.. then remembered my signatures. oO
anyways, i liked this alot. especially the repeated bits and ego-boost. you used them just right.
loved this:

quote:
This disease, it's killing me,
I'm your ego-boost.
Yeah, this disease, will I be free?
I'm your ego-boost.

Nice write.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

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