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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Perhaps Perhaps my time has come and I will be no more A petal fallen from a tree whisped away by the wind No more music to my ears a struggle now undone A stranger long forgotton leaving traces of dust to be swept When song birds unite in harmony and night lays the moon to rest Soft breezes in the evenings air may well be the road I travel Words will be all I had for children there are none Paper logs will all be burned too cumbersome to be kept Out in the stream of digital dreams there may be a shining light And so it is when I am gone the only evidence of my life c2002SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (09-01-2002 09:22 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This gave me goose bumps, Electra... I wonder how true this is for so many of us. Beautifully written...  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, it is well done, though very sad and contemplative. I did notice you need another "o" in "to" cumbersome...too cumbersome and "maybe" should be "may be" in the way you are using it. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Vas, Thank you for the proof read. I try to be sensitive to that. I guess I was just too tired when I wrote it! Appreciate the proofing and the comment. Sincerely, SimplyGold  [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (09-01-2002 09:38 AM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Madame C, This realization gives me goosebumps too! It just spilled out. Think I'll go read "Decadance" again. Elec   [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (09-01-2002 01:57 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - there you go again, Golden one... BC |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a good one Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is sooooo powerfully sensitive, sweet friend, you have a true golden heart and you speak of your feelings so sincerely, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I know one thing for sure, when your days are done and gone (many, many years from now!)---you will have left a legacy of golden poems here at PIP. Linda |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Sweet Noah, SimplyGold |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps my friend who loves this very word, will come along if I help you back to the top...perhaps... do know, I enjoyd this...  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Sweet Earth Angel, Your poems are a joy to read and read and read and.. Bill, thank you as well. You are both so encouraging. SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (09-04-2002 09:26 PM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Sunshine, Thank you, you are my sunshine. Appreciate it SimplyGold |
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