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angel girl
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

0 posted 2002-09-01 01:41 PM

Dawn

When arrives the morning hour
Dawn ascending o’er the land
Capturing all within its power
Respect from all it will command.

Soft light coming over the earth
Touching all with golden hues
Showing all what beauty’s worth
Offering peace none can refuse.

Early morning mist now rising
Shadows giving way to light
Such a morn is so enticing
Farewell to the quiet night.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-09-01 01:47 PM

Liz, this is absolutely beautiful...therefore
I'm keeping it!

Into my library it goes.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-01 01:48 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may the dawn always bring a smile of love and hope to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

3 posted 2002-09-01 01:57 PM

I have always had great difficulty writing poems that aren't "depressing" but this one wasn't too hard.

Enchantress- Thank you! That means a lot to me that you liked my poem so much.

Noah- You are so kind. Thank you.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-09-01 02:23 PM

Ah! We're kindred spirits for sure. I absolutely love this poem. My very first poem posted here at PIP was "The Twilight Hour" (currently on page 16 if you're interested).
I just love your poem. I've read it three times now. I especially love these two lines:

"Early morning mist now rising
Shadows giving way to light."

Pure magic!

Linda

angel girl
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

5 posted 2002-09-01 02:47 PM

Thank you Earth Angel. I read your poem and liked it very much, especially the line that says "with every stroke of God's paintbrush I witness".

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