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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-08-31 02:36 PM



I am a peaceful platypus
It's just the way I am,
If someone steps upon my bill
The worst I say is "damn!"

But if you say I'm ugly,
I'll really have a fit,
Please plug your ears, so you won't hear
Me screamin' "holy thit!"

For I'm a pretty platypus
And tend to be quite vain,
Don't ever criticize my looks
It drives me near insane!

I choose to live my life in peace
So please be on your way,
Then I won't get me dander up
And regret what I might say!

© Copyright 2002 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-31 02:53 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Linda, never listen to what those people tell you, sweet friend, we all think you are a beautiful person and obviously they don't appreciate what true beauty is! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-31 03:26 PM


Noah, I don't know how to respond to your heartfelt reply. Let's just say, that I am fortunate enough  to have never been in that position. Maybe it's because people would be too afraid to get me dander up. I'd blow them over with my profanity.....thit, fruck, you mitchy mirty mastered...
Hope my bad words didn't offend you, oh gentle one! ....You are so incredibly sweet!

Thanks for your reponse.

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-31-2002 10:43 PM).]

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