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The Id and the Ego
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The Id and the Ego |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
He brandishes his thoughts Like a sword held aloft in might His subconscious a shield Borne through that uncertain night Of anger and rage Tools of his trade Applied with just cause Upon ideals reverently laid Righteous in every respect Grim of eye, and tightened grip His valiant stand against foes Behind locked tight lips Imagined or real See them fall Each one silent reminders Of everyone of us all As he battles continually No end in sight Only more to test his strength This everlasting night His resolve of purpose Goes on forever As thoughts always do Until he falters A fatal misstep And his sword breaks in two |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
His resolve of purpose Goes on forever As thoughts always do Until he falters A fatal misstep And his sword breaks in two absolutely excellent writing!! Bravo! |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Thank you G.S. ! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Magician...your writing is superb! Fantastic ending on this piece... I most certainly enjoy your style... Very refreshing....and intriguing.  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
your images here are so vivid... Well written and enjoyed. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magician But illusion always hides the truth. That is the magic. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, yes yes...this is the good stuff.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, yes, and when he rises again with a second wind, he will serve his purpose with hope to his heart! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, your poetry is a delight to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Magician- This is excellent writing! VERY well penned! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
and with a broken sword does he yet fight on, or is the magic rent also? Good stirring poem! Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magician - this is an awesome piece of writing - enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wow! Wonderful imagery! Powerful & intense! |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Powerful pen! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very thought provoking, had to read a couple times over and got different takes on it each time, exqusitely done my friend. |
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