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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-15 11:56 AM



I never before realized
how important and how much
a life could be changed
by just a gentle touch.

A hand across the skin
so very feather light
can make a body tremble
and shiver with delight.

A touch, that's all
just a simple thing
a sliding of the hand
and the sensation it brings.

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-15-2002 12:00 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-15 12:09 PM


Brother truer words were never ever spoken, I loved this.  And to think it only takes a second to create such a sensation, and some never seem to find the time.  Did I say I loved this?

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Gabriel Frost
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2 posted 2002-08-15 04:00 PM


I think this is a great poem, especially so because we as individuals in this fast paced world, seldom take the time to realise just how big the little things are.
vlraynes
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3 posted 2002-08-26 01:07 AM



WhiteRose-
There is so much truth in these words.
Nothing is more powerful than the human touch.
Well said.
Hugs,
~Vicky


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4 posted 2002-08-26 08:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I dream so much of caressing my Joannas face and sharing my first kiss with her as it must be the most beautiful feeling in the world! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kitty**
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5 posted 2002-08-26 09:01 PM


This is so true ! A gentle touch at times can be the ultimate high !
Enjoyed this very much.

BTW: I'm going to print this and give it to my beau...Maybe he'll take the hint, huh ?;-)

Kitty..(hugs)

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

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