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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2002-08-29 09:54 PM



Endless Visions
By: Paul Wilson


Soon our journey will begin
to distant places we will go
We may never see again
visions within our minds flow

Each day this journey we make
down life’s road…and back again
Visions from which we partake
as we let our minds transcend

No limit to our visions
no limit to what wefind
To share them our decision
these visions within our mind

To see what we never knew
our visions are now abstract
They may change our point of view
for we know not their impact

The snapshots of where we’ve been
now coming through crystal clear
We seek them out from within
visions soon will disappear

To go where we’ve never been
to explore our thoughts and dreams
This journey will never end
endless visions… ours it seems

We will let our minds wander
till time forever stands still
Endless visions we ponder
forever…it’s the poets will


Thanks To Kit McCallum & Marge Tindal for all your help

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-29-2002 11:18 PM).]

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Inuwindow
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1 posted 2002-08-29 10:56 PM


Wow, this was such an enjoyable poem, full of thoughts that make one think, and reminice about people and places we have encountered. Thanks for the inspiration tonight.
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2 posted 2002-08-29 10:59 PM


I love the expression in this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-08-29 11:07 PM


A beautiful and very uplifting piece, Paul...
It gave me such a warm feeling inside.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2002-08-30 08:47 PM


What a treasure to find posted this evening Paul ... it's hard to believe that the two lovely lines you responded to in my poem, transformed themselves into this wonderful, flowing piece. I so love to ponder ... and you've captured the "endless visions" we find throughout our journey ... beautifully.

Many thanks to you for the lovely correspondence ... and for creating a journey of thoughts, that I thoroughly enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2002-08-30 08:49 PM



Please know that to be inspired by Kit and Marge is an inspiration worth reading over, and over, again...

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6 posted 2002-08-30 11:09 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I can tell Kit loves this so much as I do, this is beautiful, your words are an inspiration to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson
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7 posted 2002-08-31 01:03 AM


Inuwindow...Thank you so much. Glad it brought back some memories for you...Paul

loner_23... Thanks for the kind words...Paul

Lyra...Your kind words are so very welcome.
Glad that you enjoyed it...Paul

Kit... All I can say is thanks for the seed you planted within my mind, I will always remember your words of encouragement...Paul

Sunshine...I have truly been inspired by all of you here at pip. Thanks for your kind reply...Paul

Noah...I am so glad you enjoyed this. You replies are always so up lifting. Thank You...Paul

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8 posted 2002-08-31 10:49 AM


Paul

Beautiful in flow and wisdom's lace.  Much enjoyed!

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-08-31 11:08 AM


Paul~
To watch you work and develop these thoughts was a pure pleasure~

'Endless visions we ponder
forever…it’s the poets will'


Indeed !

Thanks for sharing with Kit and myself ...~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-08-31 12:28 PM


Paul - there is no limit to visions, some do come true. Great write...

BC

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11 posted 2002-08-31 01:18 PM


Paul,
  What a wonderful read! Where would we be without our visions ? They help us to focus
on new tomorrows and they let us search our
hearts and souls of the past that is buried within the depths of our minds! Thanks for sharing this and again....
It was wonderful!!!

Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

Paul Wilson
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12 posted 2002-09-01 07:32 PM


Martie...Thank you so much for your kind reply...Paul

Marge... It is I who should be thanking you, for taking the time to help me. Your kindness will always be remembered. Thank you for everything...Paul

Bill... So true are your words. Thank you sir...Paul

Kitty... Your words are so kind. I really appreciate them. Where would we be without our dreams and visions. Memories of yesterday and dreams of tomorrow that is all we have...Paul

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