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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-08-29 02:33 PM


~House For Sale~



    

Four bedrooms three baths, this house is for sale
custom designed to the smallest detail
and loving thoughts driven in with each nail

and the time and trouble it took to pick
the very finest of fireplace brick

the walls hold the echoes of laughter and tears
of the family who loved here for so many years

in moments of quiet, you can still hear the noise
made by the tussling of two little boys
as they argued and fought over their toys

you can still see the dad, watching the game
from the sofa...he cheered his favorite team
and the mom in the kitchen, mixing and chopping
coffee pot perking and toaster 'a' popping

outside in the woods, wildlife abounds
birds in trees, chipmunks scamper around
sometimes there'd be a family of deer
you can tell by their tracks in the snow...
they'd been here

    

but there's too much space now, with the children grown
and living in places all of their own
so this beautiful home, designed with such care
and lived in so well but showing some wear

is looking for love from somebody new
to replace the family, within it which grew
~



Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks


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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-08-29 02:39 PM


Lyra,
I hope your words will give Maureen some balm during this tough time for her.

Mike

P.S. Every time I see you now, I have to offer you an


nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-08-29 03:14 PM


a very lovely poem Lyra...beautiful pictures too..I think I love those with snow the best.
hugsss and thanks
M

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-08-29 04:38 PM


Thanks so much, for your reply and also for the lovely acorn, Mr.Squirrel...
I enjoyed both...
~ hugs and acorns

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-08-29 04:40 PM


Thanks so much, Maureen...
I really do think that houses develop their own personalities.  A lot of it depends on who lived there.
~ big smiling hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-08-30 12:13 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Lyra, I agree, I believe every house has a special story and tradition and though we may move the spirit never ends in the house! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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6 posted 2002-08-30 11:23 AM


thanks so much...beautiful!
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