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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-08-29 01:43 AM

The ocean
minimizes
everything but itself

even days of wanting

all plans
humbled

it’s been a long time
since I’ve seen the ocean

would ya
take a day trip
with me

we’ll put the top down
you can pick the soundtrack

doesn't matter much to me
who drives

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-08-29 01:45 AM

Doesn't much matter to me if the top is up or down, but I get to drive, ok?
I miss the beach!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2002-08-29 07:09 AM

I'm ready...what time you picking me up??? you're going to have to drive pretty fast if it's only going to be a day trip!!!

Though, I must say, of all the places I've seen the ocean, the neatest was England where the tide goes out about half a mile.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-08-29 10:13 AM

The ocean
minimizes
everything but itself

even days of wanting
================================

God how I hope so .....

*smiling at you for this*
I'll send you a post card if you send me one

(TY)

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-08-29 10:18 AM

It sounds good to me, Duncan...
but hurry up, summer is almost over...
although in autumn...the ocean has it's own beauty.

~ hugs from a chipmunk yearning for the ocean

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-08-29 12:39 PM

Don't forget the sunscreen.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-08-29 12:48 PM

As Robert Deniro once asked, "Are you talking to me?!? Are you talking to me?!?"
--If you are, you're on! Sounds like a plan!
---I'll bring my Beethoven CD!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-08-29 01:26 PM

Duncan,
Nothing better then a drive and a sea breeze.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2002-08-29 01:47 PM

Yes, Duncan let her be in control, we love that. I hope you enjoy the trip, but like you said the ocean is vast so just beware

Loved the poem reads like a song!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-08-29 04:10 PM

Duncan~
This is WONDERFUL !

Can we stop and build sandcastles ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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