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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-28 06:20 PM








~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-08-28 06:29 PM


Margie girl darling heart sister and writer of nights wonder, this is breathtakingly lovely, I love it love it love it utterly. Loud bravo’s coming from the front stalls here darling heart, and shouts of encore encore. I could sit and drink at the fountain of your wisdom from dawn to moonset, and still I would find you infinitely fascinating, I would garner knowledge in your garden of wordy delight. Shower my soul in your voice and let my mind tread the ways of truth you have mapped. I’d spin the moonbeams into a cloak of silver, which I would lay over your shoulders to illume the night’s darkness. Now take the thought and spin the magic darling heart, you know that you can do it again.

Truly awesome writing darling girl, I’m truly awe-struck at this piece of starlight’s caress. I really love it and this is a definite keeper, (Of course I keep all yours but this is particularly exquisite


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

CSKpoet
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2 posted 2002-08-28 06:31 PM


OHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHH!!
Very cuddlely and romantic.
I am such a sucker for the warm fuzzy romantic writes
you are amazing!
  Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-08-28 07:48 PM


That is so seductively sensuous. It makes me tremble with desire!

Love, Light & Lust (whoops! Laughter),
Linda

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-08-28 07:56 PM


Now...a favorite of mine
SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-08-28 08:37 PM


Very romantic, Marge!
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6 posted 2002-08-29 04:37 PM


Marge:  You create one masterpiece after another!  Even when you aren't feeling your best!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-08-29 04:40 PM


Marge,  Well I am just not happy. Ever since I set up the new computer I can't see your poems at all. Just a box with an X. Hopefully I'll get that fixed soon because I do so miss your lovely words and pictures.
Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-08-29 04:43 PM


I love the romantic sensuality of this one, Marge...
~ scampery chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-08-29 07:57 PM


*Thanks everyone ... I really like this one too~

MarshaLove~
Oh girlie girl ... thank YOU for the sweet belief in me ...
Your Cloak of Silver is a perfect fit, YES ?
You wear it with love my sweet friend~

KoKo~
Thankee gal for dropping in on this one~
It felt all warm n' fuzzy to me too~

EarthAngel~
Awwwww ... I thank you for enjoying it THAT much~

WynterGal~
Then that makes me like it even more~
Thank you ... can't wait ... can't wait~

SweetSuzieQ~
Yeah .... sometimes they work out that way~
Thank you sweetie~

BettyLou~
I sure apprecite you ... and I'll be back to par 'soon' ... I hope~
Until then ... poetry's about the only therapy working !

WhiteRose~
Shucks !!!
Hope you get that little glitch fixed real soon~
Mine did it for awhile right after Ron switched to the new server ... it FINALLY straightened up so I can actually SEE my own poems too~

Lyra~
Ahhhhh, it was a romantic little muse of a whisper~
Thank you sweet lady~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Betty
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10 posted 2002-09-02 09:09 PM


This is so pretty Marge. I can feel the love in it.
~hugz~
Betty

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-09-05 01:45 PM


Betty~
I so appreciate your replies~
To know that one feels the love
that a poet writes is a supreme compliment~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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