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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-08-28 05:20 PM


Everything I write
is a fragile poem to you,
of love and grace and loss
and hope to find the sun again.
In your night, I feel the day
and brush the tallest tips of trees
with one shower of rain
to write to you aglow.

© Copyright 2002 MPC - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-28 05:25 PM




just... --

but NOT!!!

I wanted to thank you for introducing us to Lady Lori...she is quite a dynamic wonder, and a helluva writer too!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-08-28 05:28 PM


Yep, Lori rocks the coast (even though she's land-locked)

Hopefully, I will soon be land-locked, too.



And hey -- only I can do lazy replies! Heh heh.

Thanks, Sen.

Mikey

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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-08-28 05:56 PM


I loved your way with words long before knowing of Lori..it just makes yours have twice the meaning now...

in otherwords Mike...I admire your ability to say what I can't.


M

Anvrill
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in the interzone now
4 posted 2002-08-28 06:45 PM


I'm comin' in grinnin' again. Admittedly, I should still be fighting the evil lack-of-sleep fairy, but I gave up. *yawn*

Love you, Mikhail, ewig und immer. Your words are so important to me, my angsty poet boy. So there.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

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Realms of Light
5 posted 2002-08-28 06:52 PM


As the former late night television host, Arsenio Hall, used to say, "Hmmmm"!--Food for thought, perchance to ponder!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

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6 posted 2002-08-28 07:10 PM


Maureen, thank you for your kind words. But believe me, you write just as well (if not better).

Lori, I'm glad my words touch you.

Linda, Hmmmmm.... Thanks!

Mike

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7 posted 2002-08-28 07:18 PM


Everything I write
is a fragile poem to you,
of love and grace and loss
and hope to find the sun again.
=================================

how very lucky she is to have someone to write for her so heart on sleeve sincere...
and for you to be so sweetly inspired.
I remember what this feels like...to have someone write their heart down in words...
and poetically declare and display it...
God, how I miss it.

You two make me smile thru mothy tears.

In the space between now and then
I lost the fire, lost a friend
and Ill never be the same again
Still, I believe in the innocence
we gave away.

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-08-28 08:53 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Michael, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy for the both of you and wish for happiness to always fill both your hearts! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and ligh always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Anvrill
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9 posted 2002-08-28 10:57 PM


I've come back to grin like a fool again.



I am sooo in love. Is this healthy after you've known someone 6 years? Maybe I should calm down a bit. This isn't even the crush phase! I was in that deep 5 years ago, with nary the guts to actually tell him.

Lovely baby o' mine... Keep writin'.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

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10 posted 2002-08-28 11:22 PM


Mr.Squirrel...
You are such a marvelous
You put us all to shame...
So is Lori Ann going to be Mrs.Squirrel soon?
~ curious rodent hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel
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11 posted 2002-08-28 11:23 PM


Butterfly Slippers, you're too sweet. Thanks for your always awesome words...

Noah, thank you.

Lori, you're cute when you reply twice. *kiss*

Mike

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12 posted 2002-08-28 11:25 PM


Lyra! Heh heh, time will tell.   (yes ... once I get my squirrely butt up in Calgary)

Mike

    

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-28-2002 11:26 PM).]

LRbaba
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13 posted 2002-08-29 08:17 AM


yes,
very much
very much

bsquirrel
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14 posted 2002-08-29 11:39 AM


Thanks, LRbaba.

Mike

Martie
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15 posted 2002-08-29 01:29 PM


Mike

Your simple words are so filled with tender and real...didn't know there were guys like you around the LA area...she is lucky, that Lori-Anne

bsquirrel
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16 posted 2002-08-29 02:09 PM


Martie,
Well, I'm a 3-year transplant
from New Hampshire.
That might explain it
(or confuse matters more)



Mike

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
17 posted 2002-08-29 03:28 PM


Lovely loverly poem for your lady love.
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

bsquirrel
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18 posted 2002-08-29 03:31 PM


Thank you, Cher.

Mike

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