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The Fall of a God
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The Fall of a God |
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Doug Pretorius Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 81Ontario, Canada |
The Fall of a God August 27, 2002 Copyright 2002 Doug Pretorius I hold my head and kick the dust from my feet like kicking off my old life a life I never believed I lived the life I was sold I went where I was told now you've let me down like all those before I wanted to trust you I thought you were more a dazed dream is what I am in the end but you're nothing without me, friend here I understand how I could be so deceived you are a god but only because of me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Doug, I feel a great sense of yearning in this, yes, friends always make such wonderful demi-gods and may they always be there for you to support you in great need! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, it is so great to read your wonderful poetry again, I have missed you so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Doug, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Doug Pretorius Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 81Ontario, Canada |
Noah, I'm VERY pleased that you realized this was about a human 'god', and so quickly. You must be getting to know my style well |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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