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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2002-08-27 08:11 PM


Time Moves

See the shadow of the passing cloud
Feel the softness of the passing rain
Walk barefeet through the river's pebbles
Seek the smoothness of the reeds

In the valley of your journey
To the depths of your soul
Take a moment to cherish your life
For times moves onwards, there is a destination

If there are doubts and troubles hovering
Find yourself within your mind
Search for meaning of your being
Whilst time moves you can look behind

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-08-27 08:24 PM


I like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-08-28 03:22 PM


Time moves much too quickly.  I enjoyed this.  Nice writing!
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3 posted 2002-08-28 03:56 PM


Very nice. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2002-08-28 04:31 PM


nice feeling to this
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