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VAS
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0 posted 2002-08-27 12:37 PM



agonizing strife
layers ripped from smile, heart, soul
why do I succumb?

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-27 01:30 PM


oh very sad! Especially the face at the end. Interesting question you pose to yourself.
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-08-27 02:42 PM


you need not succumb
the agony will not last
you are wonderful

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3 posted 2002-08-27 03:07 PM


We all do sometimes. The best part is when that ends -- as it always does.
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4 posted 2002-08-27 03:44 PM


VAS,
Powerful senyru, enjoyed.

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just out of reach
5 posted 2002-08-27 03:47 PM


Gee, I wish I could write these with the ease that you and some of the other poets here do. Wonderful Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-08-27 08:46 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Virginia, my heart goes out to you, this is sad and I hope everything is alright as my thoughts are with you to ease the tears! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, hope will always find a way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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