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secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2002-08-26 12:57 PM



----------------- Silent we are
----------------- We still kept silent
----------------- Your reasonable considerations
----------------- And our tense state
----------------- Sitting together silently
----------------- Waiting you to say it
----------------- Still silent
----------------- My body trembles from your looks
----------------- Needs the warm from you cute heart
----------------- Still silent waiting you to say it
----------------- I lost my control, I felt
                  Coolness when you asked me to see
                  Deep inside your eyes to say what
                  You wane say
----------------- I couldn’t see your eyes because
                  There was something strange  
                  Killing me deep inside
----------------- In the end you say it
----------------- I love you
----------------- I felt the word penetrated my
                  Heart
----------------- And I start crying deep inside
                  Crying and crying silently
----------------- And my heart always says I love
                  You too from my all soul
----------------- At least you say it
----------------- Strange silent, strange looks and
                  Strange feelings
----------------- Silent word
----------------- I love you too
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-08-26 01:18 AM


Your secret is out now. And yes, it is time to say those words to the one you love.
EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2002-08-26 01:27 AM


you know, whenever you say those words, it is true no matter what. so you dont have to worry about it not being true. i belive its always there, it just waits to be ackknowledged.

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

Gabriel Frost
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Between midnight thoughts
3 posted 2002-08-26 11:30 AM


Those words can move mountains, i know.I'm still waiting myself to hear it from someone, even wrote a poem on it called  say that u love me.I love your piece especially beacuse it focuses on the intensity of the raw emotions, which at times like those are too much for words!Great work!
Night Shadow
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4 posted 2002-08-26 12:11 PM


Nothing can make him silent anymore, his heart still full of love which inspire it from your love.

Night Shadow

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5 posted 2002-08-26 09:24 PM




(smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the peace and comfort of this, true love shines from your golden heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

The Nexious
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6 posted 2002-08-27 07:48 PM


your man is great....and that the way love goes

Be WARE...

secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
7 posted 2002-08-31 11:18 AM


Thank you all for ur sweet reply Iam glad that u read mine,,,,

Thanx alot
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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