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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-25 09:18 PM



Conceptual Manifestations
~*Marge Tindal*~

They come in complete surround
these visions without sound
As I watch, they gather
holding words
holding words~

Crystal balling of my thoughts
in conceptual manifestations
Word-holding me in their gather~

Encircled am I in concept of intend
I do not blink
for fear they think
I am not listening~

I breathe not
So they stay
have their say
Holding words in gather~


*For Krissy ... because she believed I could~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2002-08-25 09:22 PM


*speechless*
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2 posted 2002-08-25 09:23 PM


And I believe you have....

When a thought comes,  it can come from some
strange places...

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-08-25 09:54 PM


Beautiful Marge! As always!
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4 posted 2002-08-25 10:08 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart, Krissy KNOWS you CAN and so do I. As Krissy is so fond of saying when she speaks of you, she says Margie girl spins magic our of the air, and I love it when she does. I think I would have to agree with her there you have spun magic, it is utterly utterly perfect. I know I tend to say over and again how much your writing awes me, but it never ever ceases to touch me within the places in my soul that await the touch of you. You step across my heart and soul with your delicate and perfect wordy grace and I’m left speechless. I know if this is me speechless what am I like when I can talk You know exactly what I’m like when I do.

Truly exquisite writing, one of your utter best I love it love it love it, utterly love it

And of course I wub you too.
  

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
Xxxx
Counting the days now

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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5 posted 2002-08-25 10:08 PM


Wonderful Marge!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-08-25 10:40 PM


Marge:  Absolutely outstanding!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-08-26 08:04 AM


This is really good Marge & as always I love it.
*Hugs*
Betty

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8 posted 2002-08-26 05:12 PM


One thing is for sure Marge....Your conceptual manifestations are always beautifully and artfully done when you transfer them to the poetry pages.
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9 posted 2002-08-26 05:22 PM


See?

The photos are backing.
The words are
everything.

Mike

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10 posted 2002-08-26 07:28 PM


This doesn't need any visual aid...
the words carry it beautifully, Marge...
~ a hug and a grin

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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11 posted 2002-08-26 09:20 PM


marge,
And you do it so well. Enjoyed

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2002-08-29 09:12 AM


ElfiinTigress~
*thanks*

Magnus~
*smiling*
I love the challenge of a word-inspire~

SweetSue~
Thanks hon~

MarshaLove~
Krissy IS a *gift* to my heart~
Thank you~

NightShade~
Thank you so much~

Betty~
You're a doll !

ETHome~
I so appreciate you~

BSquirrel~
Ahhhh, sometimes ... sometimes~

Lyra~
Thank you love~

Seymour~
Thanks sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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