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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-08-25 07:52 PM


Nancy...the devil (you) made me do this...


Succulent sweet taste
as touches linger the lips
and waning fires dance the night
of passionate fruits savored
once…..more

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-25 07:58 PM


Delicious in 20 words or less. Great Job!
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2 posted 2002-08-25 10:15 PM


Magnus darling heart I hear the words ripple though my soul, how well you know love darling heart. And how beautifully you display its grace, excellent writing stunningly well written the way it flows from beginning to end in such sweet perfection. I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly. You are always brilliant at these 20 or less darling heart and this is exquisitely written

This is simply gorgeous writing well done,
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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3 posted 2002-08-25 10:18 PM


Oh my!! Yummy write!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2002-08-25 10:34 PM




(smiles) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, you always write such gorgeous twenty or lesses along with your epic ballads of chivalry, this is superb, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-25 10:42 PM


wow...
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