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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-08-25 11:51 AM


“DEPTH OF FEELINGS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When you touch
me the same way
I touch you, I
feel the passion
of your being…

When you kiss
me the same way
I kiss you, I
feel your spirit
enter into mine…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Zinsser
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1 posted 2002-08-25 12:03 PM


as it should be.....   : )
beautiful
~~ Connie ~~

Kitty**
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2 posted 2002-08-25 12:07 PM


THIS IS BEAUTIFUL !!!


Kitty

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ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14
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3 posted 2002-08-25 12:23 PM


is the act of love
a carnal penetration?
No!  
it is an emotion gift
that is feasted by two
until both have devoured
each other
in toto

wonderful writing Bill!
the words breath on their own

jeff

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4 posted 2002-08-25 01:29 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it! (big hugggsssss) May true love always fill your heart with delight, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-25 07:38 PM


I know this feeling well, Bill...
Nicely expressed...
~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-08-25 07:47 PM


Wonderfully said Bill, as always.
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7 posted 2002-08-25 07:47 PM


Ahhh....Sigh....Mmmmm. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sven
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8 posted 2002-08-25 10:15 PM


not only depth of feelings. . . but, the depth of the poet as well. . .

great work my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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